This story strikes me as one that can best be appreciated by a male audience. While the story isn’t particularly pornographic, it strikes me as the kind of pornographic fantasy a man might have if he really wants to cheat on his wife—but doesn’t want to cheat on his wife. As such, it’s clever and well-written, but sometimes even a skillfully-told tale isn’t enough to redeem a story in the hands of the wrong audience.
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